The
title of this post is drawn from the autobiography of Rudyard Kipling, Nobel laureate, the second most quoted name
in English literature (according to Bartlett’s) after Shakespeare.
“Do
you like Kipling?” goes the old joke.
Answer:
“I don’t know, you naughty boy, I’ve never kippled.”
But
I’ll get back to Rudyard in a moment. First a plug from our sponsor, namely me.
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And
now back to our regularly scheduled post and Rudyard Kipling’s “Higher Editing”…
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Kipling
flashed across the London literary firmament like a comet at age 23 with the
delicious short story collection, Plain
Tales From the Hills, followed a year later by Barrack-Room Ballads, which showed
him a master versifier.
But
the shooting star did not flame out. While he continued to produce stories and
poems at a prodigious rate, he never joined his own rabid fan club. He was certainly
aware of his genius, but his approach to the craft of writing remained ever that
of a conscientious workman. He edited himself ruthlessly.
“Higher
Editing” he called it, and I’ll get to the specifics of his technique in a few
moments.
But
please note: It is possible to expand a story or novel through good editing. To
diagnose what is lacking and suggest the addition of needed material.
That is emphatically not the kind of self-editing I’m talking about here. I’m talking “less
is more,” a strictly reductive process.
Wolfe's great big doorstop novels—Look Homeward, Angel, You Can’t Go Home Again, Of
Time and the River—all landed on Perkins’ desk as cartonloads of verbal
tonnage, all requiring major surgery. For instance, from the brilliant but bloated manuscript of Angel, Perkins managed to remove 90,000
words.
I
have a similar tale, with far punier statistics. My first thriller, Lair of the Fox, was sold on the basis
of an outline and the first 100 pages to a small publisher. The completed
manuscript weighed in at 120,000 words – every one them perfect, I'll have you know.
So
I was shocked to learn from my editor that this small publishing house (Walker
& Co.), in order to reduce their printing and binding costs, never
published trade books over 80,000 words. Therefore--would I please cut 40,000
words from my manuscript.
I
did it. And I relied on Kipling’s “Higher Editing” method to do it. And the book is much the
better for it.
It
wasn’t easy. As a legendary teacher of fiction writing once explained, “This is why surgeons never operate on members of their own family and
dislike to work even on close friends.” (William Foster-Harris, The Basic
Patterns of Plot, p. 112)
A
famous American editor has his own take: “Play ‘digester’ to your manuscript;
imagine that you are an editorial assistant on a digest magazine performing a
first squeeze on the article to be digested. Can you squeeze out an unnecessary
hundreds words from each thousand in your draft?” (Gorham Munson, The Written Word, p. 170)
John
D. MacDonald used the reductive process as an intrinsic part of his creative plan. A magazine profile
of the mystery master described him “tapping out the 1,000-page drafts that he
whittles down to 300-page manuscripts in four months.” (Newsweek, March 22,
1971, p. 103)
For
this reductive process to work, however, you have to put your heart
and soul into that first draft, like Tom Wolfe or John MacDonald. Don’t edit
or second guess yourself the first time through; let yourself be driven forward by the
compelling emotion of your story; to switch metaphors, trowel on the raw pigment, which you
can shape later at leisure.
To
quote Gorham Munson again, “Write as a writer, rewrite as a reader.”
(The Written Word, p. 167)
Another
master of mystery, Elmore Leonard, went from a journeyman paperback writer (westerns
and detectives) to best-sellerdom and Hollywood fame by taking an opposite tack. He began to
edit himself in advance — on his first draft. As he famously put it (his rule
No. 10 of good writing): “Try to leave out the part that readers tend to skip.”
If
you can do that, bravo! Others, some very great writers among them, have had to go
back over their work and painfully cut out the deadwood.
Here
is the method used by Georges Simneon, whom I profiled in an earlier post..
“In
response to the imperious instruction given him by Colette, "Suppress all
literature," he embarked on developing the pared-down style which he made
so notably his own." (“About Simenon,” The European, Nov. 2, 1990)
INTERVIEWER:
"What do you mean by 'too literary'? What do you cut out, certain kinds of
words?"
SIMENON:
"Adjectives, adverbs, and every word which is there just to make an
effect. Every sentence which is there just for the sentence. You know, you have
a beautiful sentence—cut it. Every time I find such a thing in one of my novels
it is to be cut." (Simenon quoted in Writers At Work, The Paris Review
Interviews, p. 146)
To quote Leonard again, “If it sounds like writing, I rewrite it.”
Granted,
that rule does not apply to the beloved storytellers of an earlier era—to Jane
Austen or Dickens, to Tolstoy or Conrad. Nor even to my favorite of current
thriller writer, Frederick Forsyth. Narrative charm is a special skill of selected yarn-spinners,
an honor to be conferred by adoring readers.
So,
at last, we come to Kipling’s “Higher Editng.” Here he describes how he used it
on his debut story collection, Plain Tales From the Hills:
“They
[Anglo-Indian tales] were originally much longer than when they appeared, but
the shortening of them, first to my own fancy, after rapturous re-readings, and
the next to the space available, taught me that a tale from which pieces have
been raked out is like a fire that has been poked. One does not know that the
operation has been performed, but everyone feels the effect...
This
leads me to the Higher Editing. Take of well-ground Indian Ink as much as suffices and a camel-hair brush proportionate to the interspaces
of your lines. In an auspicious hour, read your final draft and consider
faithfully every paragraph, sentence and word, blacking out where requisite.
Let it lie by to drain as long as possible. At the end of that time, re-read
and you should find that it will bear a second shortening. Finally, read it
aloud alone and at leisure. Maybe a shade more brushwork will then indicate or
impose itself. If not, praise Allah and let it go, and "when thou hast
done, repent not."... The magic lies in the Brush and the Ink.” (Rudyard
Kipling, Something of Myself, p. 224-225)
Another notion recently popped into my brain. How about being a fly on the wall in the Writers’ Room at Sid Caesar’s old “Your Show of Shows,” which,
as Wikipedia states, was “a live 90-minute variety show that was broadcast weekly in the
United States on NBC (Saturdays, 9:00-10:30 p.m. Eastern Time/6:00-7:30 p.m.
Pacific Time), from February 25, 1950, until June 5, 1954...”
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